[Derek]

This is my Official post where i will be listing my youtube videos of Claytonia! Please watch and leave a RAVE if you enjoyed and have a good day!
Episode 1: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-WHwqiOk_YE
Episode 2: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HeftMjeHGLA

[sharingjan]

Suggestions/constructive feedback after i watched your video's

Pro's
I like your voice, it's very clear and i can understand you good, 1 thing try to avoid a lot of uhm's.
variety of the things you do
especially liked the first episode with I need cows, can't find cows, look bacon i love bacon. hey cows fuck the bacon i want beef.

The feedback.
- When i watched the first episode it feeled like i missed something. you suddenly start a let's play. better would be to explanate some things, like on what server you are, who you are. and what you're doing.
- try to get a straight act. first you apologized before you swore afterwards you swore without a apology. good if you make this let's play for adults/teens, but if you want little kids to watch your video's too, don't swear.
- explain things, you suddenly say something like old/new hub and shops and things, good for the ones who play vanilla on our server, but others might not understand this.

Hope this helps, it is only constructive feedback and hope you enjoy making video's on our server

p.s. not posting on your video's till youtube goes back to old comment system. not gonna link google+ with youtube.

[Farquad94]

Subscribed!
You should do a series on the Roleplay server:D

[Clay]

Subscribed!
You should do a series on the Roleplay server:D

ditto

[Zito]

You should play a bit on Towny/Econ as well!

[Clay]

What other games do u record?